Saturday, April 4, 2020

Visual Narrative Rendition Two




9 comments:

  1. I love, love, love this work! The visuals are stunning! I can tell you put a lot of work into each image. I'm very proud of your work and am looking forward to seeing more progress and your next project.

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  2. I really liked looking at your work! I think I enjoy the 2nd rendition better just because I feel the colors are richer.

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  3. I love how you incorporated the blender with space! For how different they are, they go together really well in your composition. I especially love how dynamic the last images is.

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  4. Pretty funny image here, but I think it works well. Maybe there is a way to show a little more motion in the second image to show the blending action?

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  5. I love this so much, the narrative is super clear and its very strong visually as well. I agree that some more motion would make that middle image more clear. Awesome job!

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  6. Love the color and the imagery you have going for you narrative. I believe the second rendition might look more appeasing.

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  7. I really wish you could use the 2nd and a 3rd for this project. I think fi you had both it would make the meaning extremely strong and without the 2nd photo i find it hard to determine that it is a blender in the 3rd. I do believe your 3rd is your strongest image.

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  8. Liz Griffin

    From Lauren B - Your illustration looks so effortlessly done, I believe you're very close to a final product! Have you considered presenting all three pieces together as a series? I think they would compliment each other well together and strengthen your narrative significantly. Absolutely love!

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  9. From Cameron
    This is so well executed! I love the colors and the way you made the galaxy look. The idea with the blender is super cool and I think you’re close to being done!

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